Introduction: The Importance of IT to Peri-operative Nurses
Page 1 of 1
Introduction: The Importance of IT to Peri-operative Nurses
With today’s evolution of information technology [IT], many individuals and groups in society were exponentially benefited in different facets of life. It is evident that the presence of IT has impacted various areas of work related systems in a positive manner. In the healthcare sector, information technology integration provides a number of advantages to peri-operative nurses.
I showed to my draft to teacher Derek this afternoon and he suggested that the word "invasion" should be changed. I think that what he meant was that "invasion" would give the audience a negative interpretation about IT - where in fact, my essay is all about the positive impact of IT to the peri-operative nurses. In the first line of my introduction, I changed the two words - that is, "widespread invasion" - to "evolution". This is the best word I can think of, but I am open to any suggestion.
I showed to my draft to teacher Derek this afternoon and he suggested that the word "invasion" should be changed. I think that what he meant was that "invasion" would give the audience a negative interpretation about IT - where in fact, my essay is all about the positive impact of IT to the peri-operative nurses. In the first line of my introduction, I changed the two words - that is, "widespread invasion" - to "evolution". This is the best word I can think of, but I am open to any suggestion.
Last edited by trellou on Sat Dec 04, 2010 1:59 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : typo)
trellou- Posts : 21
Join date : 2010-09-17
Similar topics
» Introduction to THe Importance of Informaton Technology to Perioperative Nurses
» The importance of information technology to perioperative nurses
» Third Paragraph: The importance of Information Technology to Perioperative Nurses
» My new introduction.
» Which introduction would sound better?
» The importance of information technology to perioperative nurses
» Third Paragraph: The importance of Information Technology to Perioperative Nurses
» My new introduction.
» Which introduction would sound better?
Page 1 of 1
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
|
|