My first Paragraph of my story

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My first Paragraph of my story

Post  Taha1006 on Wed Oct 13, 2010 12:56 pm

There was an isolated village surrounded by a very large forest. This forest was full of a wide variety of animals as well as dangerous plants. Every 3 to 4 weeks the hunters from the village used to go hunting for the animals and to collect herbs. During one of these trips, a hunter came across a boy who was lying on the ground unconscious. Surprised to find him there on the ground, he carried him back with him. As the hunters returned to the village, they were all surprised to see the young boy being carried along side with all the animals and herbs. The hunter left him in the village clinic in the care of the local doctor. The boy had some scars on his shoulder and remained unconscious.

Any feedback on this will help me to write the rest of this.

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